Song writing workshop

[funkydalek]

I like music,:music:
I like poems.:drama:
If you like these things then lets start writing some songs! I just thought it would be fun to have a place where we could make up lyrics, poems, limrics and stuff like that. It doent have to be completly serious, or very good; just as long as you wrote it.
Ill start, then its your turn ok? Dont laugh;

The four walls of my mind, painted with bright colours.
An easy escape.
Not as high definition as the the world passing by but I
Suppose cartoons were always more fun anyway.
I dont care much whats going on in your cold rainy world,
I dont want to know.
Or need your dusty truth covering my man-made sunshine.
But I suppose, soon the bus will come 'round the corner-
then Ill sit in line with the rest of you.
Meanwhile I shall stay inside my ignorance and comfort.
But yet I still long to see your world for what it really is,
or what it was really meant to be.


Yeah, ok, it doesnt rhyme - or make sense. I thought of it one day at the bus stop. Ahh well, Your turn!!

[xxzoemadcowxx]

Well cool! Now its my turn!

Looking out the window,
Gazing at the stars,
I wonder where we come from,
From here on earth or mars.
Cause everyone is different,
Each hard to understand,
With different dreams and interests
I find it hard, a place to stand.
But somewhere in the world,
There's a place for those like me,
We all meet and chat together,
As happy as can be.
Where is this you ask me,
I wish to share this place,
It's called The Hoosier Fanclub,
And it's staring at you face!
Here we can share differences,
Feelings, thoughts and words,
You'll be so happy, having fun,
You'll be flying with the birds!

[singing chick]

(chorus)
goodbye mrs k (kerridge) promised u would love us but u didn't know anything!
goodbye mrs k u didn't know the answers and i haate u!

if teachers were carrots i'll eat u all up
if u were a parrot i'll kill u like THAT!

o oh o oh o oh oh o oh o oh
(verse 2)
so busy trying to prove i'm wrong u forgot to switch ur feelings on

i must say ur so DUMB!

and would never want to talk to me e e

[funkydalek]

HAHAHAHA!! Singing chick - is ther no end to your beautiful randomness!

Yay! I like yours Zoe. Tis very profound too! The fan club is definetly a cool place.

[singing chick]

mrs kerridge was a sub teacher for me 'cause the head left and my teacher had to play that part until they found another 1 but god she wore see-through t-shirts

[xxzoemadcowxx]

Hey thanks funkydalek - i really appreciate it!

I shall write another one cause I'm feeling joyful,

Joy was girl,
Sitting on the fence,
All day long,
Humming the lyrics to her favourite songs.
Once in a dream,
A person said to her,
Come with me,
We'll sail of together into the sea.
She got into the boat,
With the mysterious man,
Eyes opened wide,
As they sailed to the right side.
The boat stopped off,
At the shore,
They walked up the beach,
Together as close as people can reach.
Walking slow,
Without a word from each,
A cave came into sight,
The figure dragged the girl out of the night.
Into the cave,
He pulled her to,
Pushed her against the wall,
Waiting for her to fall.
As she falls,
She feels his breath,
Getting closer to her face,
His breath felt warm is the cold dark place.
His lips moved in,
Touched hers,
Soft and sweet,
He sweep her off her feat.
As she opened her closed eyes,
He dropped her,
She fell an ever-ending fall,
Until she awoke and she could recall,
The man in her dreams,
Was the many in the songs,
The one who rescued her from her life
And the sad days that caused her strife.


A bit wierd but I can rhymn and i like it!

[funkydalek]

ohhhhhhhhhhh..... its so prettyfull! But scary, but lovely, but sad, but happy.
YAAAAYY! I love it when peoms give mixed emotions, makes me feel nice inside... for some reason.
Where did you get your inspiration from?

[xxzoemadcowxx]

I don't know actually. Personal dreams and general reading of stuff. I like to be creative and I can just write the words down. I get inspiration from listening to other songs. Here's another I just made up (I'm enjoying this lots and lots)


Sitting here gazing at the skies,
Wondering where ordinary lies.
People are never what they seem,
When there's no truth, I just want to scream.

I need a place to go,
I need someone unique,
I want to show,
My true identity.

Where are all the real life people?
Are there here or over there.
It seems quite hard these days,
To find some truth around,
Can someone real please make a sound?

Every day I walk by,
The same old place, the same old street,
But I never seem to meet,
A real individual.
With a different life, and different tasts.
Why is everyone the same?

I need a place to go,
I need someone unique,
I want to show,
My true identity.

Where are all the real life people?
Are there here or over there.
It seems quite hard these days,
To find some truth around,
Can something real please make a sound?

No place to go, no place run,
To find the different ones.
Who explore a different world
A make you feel at home.

Where are all the real life people?
(real life people)
Are there here or over there.
(here or there)
It seems quite hard these days,
To find some truth around,
Can something real please make a sound?

Can something real please make a sound?

[funkydalek]

NO WAY! that is so so so so so relative to what Ive been feeling at the moment. Like life is stuck in a kindof loop that we cant escape. RIGHT! Im gonna write one now - you have inspired me.

A beautiful pattern of truth
meshed over by the worn through strings of what weve learnt
We will keep on learning
but never understanding.
It stares us in the face everyday
We live in it every day
We watch its ways everyday
but only take it like every one else,
just like a normal everyday thing.
Only problem being that everyday isnt normal.
I see those around, faces have come to accept
what they may have once deemed unimaginable. How can this be?
I suppose the years in their experince are unimaginable
to me as I have not seen or felt them. Am I the
only one who creates craters in the ground as my frustraited
senses defy me once again and try to make me blend in with my surroundings.
Am I the only one who can not understand the simple things we see
eachday
everyday
like clockwork.
Ever ticking, no time for questions.


Hmmm, I have a funny feeling Im going mad. sorry it doesnt rhyme, I write on impulse so it never makes any sense, lol!

[Jacqui...]

can it just be like anything ?
yours are like good lyricsss ! i cant reli write songs well :\
ok im bored enough to write some crappy music by me :)
.....
sitting here watching over you
for hours long
so i thought i would make a little song
are you dead or alive ?
this is all such a suprise
you just have to survive
why didnt i realise
with all the things you said
you really just cant end up dead!
and now im sitting here
writing this song
i know i really cant rhyme
this has probably gone just so wrong
i mean look at the time
though this didn't take long
now theirs a tear in my eye
why cant you just wake up
i dont want to say bye
its been so long since i heard your voice
i know i shouldnt be sad
but how could i feel glad
when your lying their still
now even im feeling ill
oh please just wake up.
i would tak your place anyday
just to see your smiling face
why does it always happen to you
its so unfair
but sadly so true
you dont know how much i care
just try
dont die :)

[xxzoemadcowxx]

Sitting here I'm in tears,
Realising what I missed,
And they won't stop,
I'm not at the top,
Anymore due to the pain,
Of missing what I missed...

I am so frustrated that I want to hit the Radio 1 orginises.... someone please wrtie a cheery song to make me smile..

[Irwin Sparkes rock!]

this is very bad but I was depressed 139 days ago so I wrote this:

I know that its a daydream just a makebelive tale
And that he doesn't even know my name
I know I'm just clinging on to my makebelive rail
It feels like I'm just playing my little kids game

Is this how you feel when nothing feels right?
Is this how it feels when you drift off at night?
Cause no-one,no-one understands

No-one but me

And when I dream it up it it even then goes all goes wrong
cause I know we can never be
And thats why I'm singing this stupid song (yes I know I'm not ACTUALLY singing it)
It feels like I'm just being me

Is this how you feel when nothing feels right?
Is this how it feels when you drift off at night?
Cause no-one,no-one understands

No-one but me

Is this how you feel when nothing feels right?
Is this how it feels when you drift off at night?
Cause no-one,no-one understands

No-one but me



(sorry for that)

[elicec]

Hey I just had an idea : wouldn't it be cool if The Hoosiers made a sort of contest which would consist in fans writting songs ? The best text would be adapted as the lyrics of a song in the future album !

Sure they would be litteraly inundate by messages...

[theHoOSiERs-x]

i dont think anyone could think of songs good enough for them to make into a proper one :p

[funkydalek]

Awww your songs are all so beautiful!
sorry to spoil the poetic profoundness by writing what im about to write-

once apon a time
there was a boy called jim.
and he had a house
and that house he lived in.
one day he was walking
walking down a road
everything was normal
till he met a flying toad.
the toad spoke of a journey
to meet a band of three
but of course there was a price.
now what could that price be?
"In return" croaked the toad
as Jim sat down and sighed,
"Is if you do the chicken dance"
The boy nearly cried.
For as the toad explained the deal
a boy came round the bend.
his camcorder was in his hand
"I thought you were my friend!"
Jim cried, the scenario
became the worst case
for vidios like chicken dance,
Utube was the place!
But he really wanted really bad
to see the Hoosiers too,
But was it worth his reputation
going down the loo?
he raised his nose in the air
his decision in his head.
"Forget it!" He sneered "I prefere
drum and bass instead!"
And with those words he went back home
and then went to back to bed

the end...lol. I would do the chicken dance anyday!

[You-rock-my-socks!]

i wrote this ages ago

silent crying

i cry in my room
at night never day
over nothing sometimes
but sometimes over sadness

my silent crying
is never heard
for i am not here
im being ignored like im invisible
for one of the reasons i cry

the reasons are so strong
may not understand
my silent crying emotions
lost with in my body
my feeling deep inside

the silent tears i cry
make my pillow wet
the silent tears i cry
are never heard
for i am invisible
lost in my thoughts
some where inside

[funkydalek]

ohhhhhhhh. Profound. ohhh, I wanna give you a hug, are you ok now?

[You-rock-my-socks!]

ohhhhhhhh. Profound. ohhh, I wanna give you a hug, are you ok now?

i wrote it ages ago
its not true

[Irwin Sparkes rock!]

:D all of us are so depressed. Well I'm not anymore I'm getting over it (although I still ahte him for having a girlfriend)

[theHoOSiERs-x]

haha im not depressed :D!!
anyone want to write songs for me ? can i steall them :D
lolllz i cant write songs but i can play all yours though some sound better than others preferably the ones not completley depressing :)
:lol:

[elicec]

Stupid poem I wrote two years ago. Was really bored : the game consisted in me writing something and a friend illustrated it...

A bird was flying in the sky...
A mean hunter came by...
He shot...
And the bird went to die.

I should search the final drawing...

Ok I leave the thread right now.

[xxzoemadcowxx]

Teachers should die and go to hell,
I got a rubbish new one, my grades fell
I'm now out to get him
Stab and kill him
For he is the worst in the world
And should pay the price
For the hurt and anger he has caused me
At my school called GGSG.

[You-rock-my-socks!]

i wote this today in class

round the bend

round the bend
i go agin
nothing i can do
but go round the bend
all day long
with nobody to stop it

round the bend
i go agin
screaming
quitely inside
while m body
fills with sorrow

round the bend
i go agin
spinning round and round
making myself dizzy
feeling sick
inside

[You-rock-my-socks!]

i wote this today in class

round the bend

round the bend
i go agin
nothing i can do
but go round the bend
all day long
with nobody to stop it

round the bend
i go agin
screaming
quitely inside
while m body
fills with sorrow

round the bend
i go agin
spinning round and round
making myself dizzy
feeling sick
inside

[You-rock-my-socks!]

sorry sent it 2 times

[imported_______]

your songs are very litteral
i write my songs with some friends but i think im too lazy to type them up
i write poeems sometimes too i know it might be wierd for someone like me
but here ill write one now... hmm...
you made me laugh,
you made me cry,
you made me sit and wonder why.

you were the one,
you were important,
now your just a memory.

you use to drink,
you use to drive,
you never thought that you would die.

it's not your fault it is mine,
i shouldn't of let you drink and drive,
but i did and now your gone,
and i'm alone.

you made me laugh,
you made me cry,
you made me sit and wonder why.
dedicated to my dad who died when i was really young from drunk driving
lol i know its not vey goo but i made it up in what 1 minute or so :p
have to go anyway byee xxxxx

[irwinisthebombyey]

what a good idea for a thread! i'll definately post tomorrow but i need to go now! bye!

[Irwin Sparkes rock!]

I was unprepared,
unprepared for the way
the way you looked at me.
I've seen it everyday,
it puts a smile on my face

Unprepared, when you were just walking down the street
Unexpected, was the rush of sudden heat
Can't help but smile, cause I know,
I know I feel the same

It was unexpected
Unexpected that you'd make me,
make me feel the way I do
I'm sure that people see
The smile on my face when you arrive

Unprepared, when you were just walking on the beach
Unexpected, when you were just outta reach
Can't help but smile, cause I know,
I know I feel the same

I was, unprepared.

It was, unexpected.


:s: not to good at rhyming.

[imported_______]

too much ryhming just ruins something perfectly fine ;-)

[Irwin Sparkes rock!]

thats me! maybe I'll make it not rhyme. keep it or change it?

[imported_______]

your choice :-)

[Irwin Sparkes rock!]

:s: I'll keep it its easier :p

[imported_______]

too true
im off now
night night ;-) xxx

[Irwin Sparkes rock!]

:wave: I guess I'll go too sicne no-ones on!

[xxwanting]

Awww your songs are all so beautiful!
sorry to spoil the poetic profoundness by writing what im about to write-

once apon a time
there was a boy called jim.
and he had a house
and that house he lived in.
one day he was walking
walking down a road
everything was normal
till he met a flying toad.
the toad spoke of a journey
to meet a band of three
but of course there was a price.
now what could that price be?
"In return" croaked the toad
as Jim sat down and sighed,
"Is if you do the chicken dance"
The boy nearly cried.
For as the toad explained the deal
a boy came round the bend.
his camcorder was in his hand
"I thought you were my friend!"
Jim cried, the scenario
became the worst case
for vidios like chicken dance,
Utube was the place!
But he really wanted really bad
to see the Hoosiers too,
But was it worth his reputation
going down the loo?
he raised his nose in the air
his decision in his head.
"Forget it!" He sneered "I prefere
drum and bass instead!"
And with those words he went back home
and then went to back to bed

the end...lol. I would do the chicken dance anyday!


:lol: yours made me laugh so hard! ahaah enjoyed the worst case scenario reference!

[funkydalek]

haha! Im glad someone spotted it!

[funkydalek]

Today was a day
eyes focus on parts of a picture
never the real thing or the whole
picture.
But merley bits that I piece together into what is exeptable
within my idea of what everyone elses idea is.
I watch the day
turn and twist
but act as normal;
What I think everyone else thinks is normal.
But what they see is normal is
what they think others see as normal.
Chinese whispers across a divided land,
over the sea of empty space.
I skate through electronic wires
and let the pictures of my day,
turn to tiny squares.
Normal at last?


ummm... that was supposed to be some kindof unrhyming - poem... thing.
sorry

[Irwin Sparkes rock!]

I was unprepared,
unprepared for the way
the way you looked at me.
I've seen it everyday,
it puts a smile on my face

Unprepared, when you were just walking down the street
Unexpected, was the rush of sudden heat
Can't help but smile, cause I know,
I know I feel the same

It was unexpected
Unexpected that you'd make me,
make me feel the way I do
I'm sure that people see
The smile on my face when you arrive

Unprepared, when you were just walking on the beach
Unexpected, when you were so close but just outta reach
Can't help but smile, cause I know,
I know I feel the same

I was, unprepared.

It was, unexpected.

I've tried to play guitar to this using power chords. It doesn't sound to good and I don't know the names of the chords but I can kinda play it :D

[MrsSparkes]

Right I've been making this poem with my friend Lucie & her mum Annabelle
It goes:

There was a young lady from Ealing
Who was filled with a tremendous feeling
For the man of her dreams
Who wore bright red jeans :p
and suddenly her life had a meaning :love1:

On the pitch at Soccer Six
She watched Irwin's shots miss
She couldn't help how she felt
Cos he just made her melt
If only he had given her a kiss :love::kiss:

Annabelle keeps telling me to send it to him, lol.
I'm not going to :lol:

[Irwin Sparkes rock!]

:D well I wouldn't!....wait but doesn't he know you like him?

[Irwin Sparkes rock!]

I spent last night writing this so obviously its bad. And i had quite a few crossings outs

I see you, my heart stops
I hear you, I go into shock
Wanna be seen by you
And for you to love me too

But I can wait
like standing in the rain
It doesn't matter how long (how long) it takes
As long as I see your face (your face)

Your name, etched on my skin
Your smile, covering my room
Want it to stay like that
I want you to love me too

But I can wait
like standing in the rain
It doesn't matter how long (how long) it takes
As long as I see your face (your face)

I count the seconds till I'm with you
How long before you count them too?
I'd give up everything, can't you see?
Would you do that for me?
The rains pouring down my face,
Counting the seconds, how long will it take?




suggestions for next verse or any part of the song are welcome *bows*

[xxwanting]

i might put that to music, it's beautiful... ...

if you don't mind :D

dedicated to irwin sparkes?

[You-rock-my-socks!]

doesnt have a title


i lay there alone
in the gloom of the night
the sorrows of deaths
came tumbling down
in flods

with hevan above
and hell benef
there was no escape at all
i lay there most the night
not a single breth left to spare

my blood came poreing out
like a spring of water
my cold icey hands toached the ground
they moved but stayed still
then it all began

i began to emerge soul and all
leaving my body behinde
my spirit drifted high and low
to test the way of life

not till morning light
my body was found
the body of a young girl
they all relised
she was......










dead

[tatty2s]

err... hmmm...its a bit gory. Is this to do with the topic of life after death that your doing at school?

[bexsta8]

It reminds me of Killer. Kind of..
:hat:

[You-rock-my-socks!]

is that a goo d thing
i do like writing gloomy poems

[Irwin Sparkes rock!]

i might put that to music, it's beautiful... ...

if you don't mind :D

dedicated to irwin sparkes?

Mine? sure!

YES

[singing chick]

i'll post my lyrics for mine and the cords for playing it on guitar!

[Irwin Sparkes rock!]

doesnt have a title


i lay there alone
in the gloom of the night
the sorrows of deaths
came tumbling down
in flods

with hevan above
and hell benef
there was no escape at all
i lay there most the night
not a single breth left to spare

my blood came poreing out
like a spring of water
my cold icey hands toached the ground
they moved but stayed still
then it all began

i began to emerge soul and all
leaving my body behinde
my spirit drifted high and low
to test the way of life

not till morning light
my body was found
the body of a young girl
they all relised
she was......










dead


I actually like it :D

[Hoosier Girl]

right i put my martin song in here cus it not finshed and i nedd help
plzs help lol this is so far...

Martins really qiute
but we love him for who he is
we also love the others
just as much as him

this is a song about martin
the wonderful martin

he always were a hat
he loves his wolly hats
but that what makes him martin
the verry sleepy martin

this is a song about martin
the wonderful martin

martin is a swede
but he the best swede we've ever seen
we love when he plays
and all the joy that he brings

this is a song about martin
the wonderful martin

[MrsSparkes]

Is this to the tune of SFTU by any chance?

[Hoosier Girl]

its for the fan alum if thats what you ment? any thorts? serjestions?

[Irwin Sparkes rock!]

I think she menat is the tune like the one for Song for the Uncertain

[Hoosier Girl]

if she ment that the aswer is no..

but i can see why she think that now look at it in that way
it the 'this is a song about martin, the wonderful martin!
that dose it!

any serjestions too what could change the
'this is a song about martin, the wonderful martin' bit too?

[funkydalek]

I wrote a song today, its pretty awful but ahh well.
The verses ar like D and Em repeted for the first two lines, then D A Em G for the rhymy bit then back to D+Em for the repeated bit.
The bridge is like... um actually I dont know what its like... somethng to do with C I think, it seems to change every time.
Chorus is D A Em G like the verse.
Middle 8 is D7 and C repeated and then a cheeky little G sharp to go back in to the chorus.
Not that you really wantd to know all that anyhoo but oh well, here goes.

(verse1)
So you think Im wrong - again
Your willing to repeat.
You know what I have to say
but want to hear it anyway
-again, every day
untill you think youve got your way.
And you think Im wrong - again.
Your willing to repeat.

(Bridge)
Did you know my views might change
if you change your attitude?
But the reason why they stay the same
is because you dont want them to.

(chorus)
This is what I believe
Accept it and move on.
Please don't fold your arms again
and tell me that Im wrong.
I believe in this too much
my point, my life, my song.
I believe in this too much
my point, my life, my song.

(Verse 2)
So you think Im wrong - again
your willing to repeat.
Your out to win, not to draw.
I turn but youve come back for more
you pity me - call me a bore
I wonder what I do this for
because you think Im wrong -again
your willing to repeat

(Bridge)
(chorus)

(Middle 8)
Shall we repeat - start again?
Just like we did yesterday?
Did you go online last night
to work out what you had to say?
(x2)

(Chorus x about 3-4)

*Sorry bout that - should of really been in the moaning thread really.

[Irwin Sparkes rock!]

lol I like it! (by any chance is it about ppl not understanding aobut you believing in God)

[funkydalek]

wow your good! Sorry - guess Im a bit predictable.

[Irwin Sparkes rock!]

no I just remember you saying somewhere about like (I think this was you... :s: ) that people don't get why you believe in god so i anylized the song should I say :D

[Irwin Sparkes rock!]

kay this is like a poem. If it does sound like it, its not aobut someone dying.

didn't hang on,
keep you there,
now your gone,
Can't find you again,

Wish you were here,
so I could spill,
my secrets, my fears,
Anything that comes,

I have no-one,
who fully understands,
I didn't hang on,
To what I should have,

People may think,
they know me well,
They're just on the brink,
Of starting to know,

I should have hung on,
But now your gone,

[xxwanting]

anything on here for the fan album? ;D

[Irwin Sparkes rock!]

don't think so...

[xxwanting]

bugger *pulls face*

could someone please work out some lyrics for the fan album :)? i've got the tunes down pat but i can't write lyrics, bleah.

[bexsta8]

I think we've already got some lyrics here:

http://www.thehoosiersfanclub.com/showthread.php?t=894

I think that's the right thread anyhoo :)

[Irwin Sparkes rock!]

Aspiration, fallen hopes and
Broken dreams lie scattered around
There's no-one near to hear my cries
So who can pick them up of the ground?

I'm alone with nowhere to run
There's no light till you've come
You are my life, my everything
The one that made me want to sing
Barely know you at all
All I want from this sh*t
Is an end like a kiss
But we know that not how this works

I don't stand out from the crowd
But I try my hardest
You try to flick me away
And it hurts though you missed

I'm alone with nowhere to run
There's no light till you've come
You are my life, my everything
The one that made me want to sing
Barely know you at all
All I want from this sh*t
Is an end like a kiss
But we know that not how this works

You're there, I reach out to touch
But everything faces
You dug a hole in my heart
All thats left is the spade

I'm alone with nowhere to run
There's no light till you've come
You are my life, my everything
The one that made me want to sing
Barely know you at all
All I want from this sh*t
Is an end like a kiss
But we know that not how this works

And nothing left cept this broken heart
And my old guitar...


:P I know I hate it all cept the last verse. Wrote it on holiday in France after I went to some caves. Where there was a tour guide thing. Where someone leads you round. Maybe you can work it out. :lol:

[Irwin Sparkes rock!]

I know this is age old and that this ¬ sucks so :p and not that you really care :p but the bits in red are my fav parts.

To walk away from life
To sever connections
With a surgical knife
Cut the problem into sections

When you look at things
In a certain light
It seems like you were attached to strings
So I prefer seeing things at night

I don’t want this anymore
I want to give up in this war
Because fighting the world
Just isn’t smart
But I don’t want to let everything unfurl
It’s much easier just to depart
But is that really the best thing?
And do I really care?

Should I let life slip by?
Like sand through my fingers
It can go in the blink of an eye
Maybe its better not to linger

I don’t want this anymore
I want to give up in this war
Because fighting the world
Just isn’t smart
But I don’t want to let everything unfurl
It’s much easier just to depart
But is that really the best thing?
And do I really care?

Should I take the easy option out?
Sometimes it seems like its best
But now I’m full of doubts
Life is like a test
If you cheat
You’ll get caught
So why don’t I wait till it’s complete
Now there’s a good thought…

I don’t want this anymore
I want to give up in this war
Because fighting the world
Just isn’t smart
But I don’t want to let everything unfurl
It’s much easier just to depart
But is that really the best thing?
And do I really care?
It’s times like these I just want to scream
Life is beautiful, like a dream
You can feel high in the sky
And how can you feel high
Without the fall?
You’ll climb back up eventually
And this time,
You’ll have wings.

[A Cop and Robber]

I wrote a chorus for a song, Need to work on it but the I'm modling the song after Pens and Needles by Hawthorne heights but with more Scraeming for the Verses so here goes
Take this broken bottles, Fix them up again
Fill them up with liqour and Drink by the Gallon

[Irwin Sparkes rock!]

Watching you
From the corner of the street
This person is oh so new
I want the person you used to be

Can we talk about this?
Cause we’re just lying all the time
And I just reminisce
When we used to be so honest
But then you took
The popularity
Over me
And you just laugh at me
Pretend that you don’t care
You’re lying all the time
So here is my final lie:
I still love you

Slammed against the wall
And yeah you just watch
And sometimes help it all
You used to have the softest touch

So now I’m ignoring you
But still listening to what you say
Listening for what’s true
I make it through the lies and the days

Can we talk about this?
Cause we’re just lying all the time
And I just reminisce
When we used to be so honest
But then you took
The popularity
Over me
And you just laugh at me
Pretend that you don’t care
You’re lying all the time
So here is my final lie:
I still love you

So since you’re lying
Every time you see me
I’m gunna stop crying
Get out of the debris

Can we talk about this?
Cause we’re just lying all the time
And I just reminisce
When we used to be so honest
But then you took
The popularity
Over me
And you just laugh at me
Pretend that you don’t care
You’re lying all the time
So I’m gunna be the strong one
Here is my first truth:
I still love you,
I’m just waiting for you to come back

[Georgiee]

This is really random, but are you seeing/have seen The Hoosiers this Octourber Emma?

[Irwin Sparkes rock!]

lol twas random and



YES


TOMORROW! WOOP I CANNOT WAIT! AGH!




I WANNA SEE THEM NOW!!!! :p

[A Cop and Robber]

This is a little song i wrote Lasy July(July 2007). It contains a line from a Hoosier song.
The song is called FEAR, It's model after Miss Murder by AFI

When It's getting to the end and There is nothing you can do
And when you see You''ll see this fear is rational and it pathetic that you face it everyday
It is coming one by one, It knows your name and there is no way you can stop it
And when you see You''ll see this fear is rational and it pathetic that you face it everyday
Face you fears,Face you fears,Face you fears x3 (With screaming on the 9th Fears and the the Vocals volume going up each time)
And when you see You''ll see this fear is rational and it pathetic that you face it everyday
Everyday, day, day ,day Woah WOAH OH

[Leah :L]

Umm i write songs when i'm really upset or something, and their all based on me and my problems.
Heres one i wrote a while back when i had so many people coming to me with so many problems and there was only one person i could turn to. She knows who she is:

Perfect Girl

I wish i was a perfect girl
Living in my perfect world
I wish i could help everyone out
And i wish i’d never get left out

But that doesn’t happen
Im not a perfect girl
This aint my perfect world
But its ok, i have you
And that’s all i need to get me through

I wish i was a perfect girl
Perfect family, perfect friends
I wish i had the perfect days
Days i wish would never end

But that doesn’t happen
Im not a perfect girl
This aint my perfect world
But its ok, i have you
And that’s all i need to get me through

But that doesn’t happen
Im not a perfect girl
This aint my perfect world
But its ok, i have you
And that’s all i need to get me through

I wish i was a perfect girl
Living in my perfect world
I wish i could help everyone out
And i wish i’d never get left out

Im not a perfect girl...

[funkydalek]

HAW! Soz for the incredulasly incredably late reply. But I lurve your song :D

[joojoo]

Umm i write songs when i'm really upset or something, and their all based on me and my problems.
Heres one i wrote a while back when i had so many people coming to me with so many problems and there was only one person i could turn to. She knows who she is:

Perfect Girl

I wish i was a perfect girl
Living in my perfect world
I wish i could help everyone out
And i wish i’d never get left out

But that doesn’t happen
Im not a perfect girl
This aint my perfect world
But its ok, i have you
And that’s all i need to get me through

I wish i was a perfect girl
Perfect family, perfect friends
I wish i had the perfect days
Days i wish would never end

But that doesn’t happen
Im not a perfect girl
This aint my perfect world
But its ok, i have you
And that’s all i need to get me through

But that doesn’t happen
Im not a perfect girl
This aint my perfect world
But its ok, i have you
And that’s all i need to get me through

I wish i was a perfect girl
Living in my perfect world
I wish i could help everyone out
And i wish i’d never get left out

Im not a perfect girl...

i love your song its brilliant!

[A Cop and Robber]

Holy :censored:, Those Lyrics are Really Deep